please check my entry and provided feedback

Hello, Project owner. I’m not sure if you will be giving feedback or not, but I have sent in a design, your honest feedback is needed. Thank you kindly.
Anh Do

Hi,

If You want any changes Please let me know.I'm always ready to deliver you unlimited revisions until your satisfaction. Looking forward for your response.

Thanks & Regards,

Hello,
may I please get some feedback?
Regards, Vivian

Thank you very much for your feedback....
I look forward to working with you...!