please leave feedback and let me know ... if I'm on right track or not? Thank You Ron

Thank you for your email.

This is not quite what I had in mind. We wanted something like a cloud shaped silver line. and must have the text of the company.

DreamTime have something similar to your design in their website. The design has to be symbolic of what the business aims to provide to its clients and what it stands for as a business.

Silver Lining Coaching

Hi there

I have just submitted a design. Feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you

Dear BR Designs

Thank you for the feedback. It is greatly appreciated.

Which design do you like specifically so i could make the appropriate changes.

Thank you.

Hello
Design #: 2602691 .

Silver Lining Coaching

Hi there,

i have submitted a revised design. Please let me know if i need to make further changes.

Thank you
BR

Submitted my first design... waiting for your valuable feedback..

Thanks
Best Regards,
Mayursinh Jadeja

Hi Mayursinh
Thank you for your design. Please understand the concept of " there is a silver lining behind every cloud" and take time to observe the "silver lining" behind the cloud. The rays which you have drawn is not what I had in mind.

Coaching is to help clients achieve their aspirations.

The design needs to be formal (professional) .

There is room for refining the design.
Regards and good luck

Silver Lining Coaching.

Can i have feedback on my submission?
Thanks