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Hi,
How are you? Any feedback or any changes of my logos? If you like my logos Please Win me I will send you All final file and Print file.
Final file Will be ( Ai, Cdr, JPG, PSD, EPS, PNG,PDF and Use fonts file I will send You :), Please let me know :)

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Hello,

Can you please check my design options and let me know your valuable feedback.I really want to know that I am on the right track or not.I'm always ready to deliver you unlimited revisions until your satisfaction.
Looking forward for your response.

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Hi, can you please provide feedback to my new logo design submitted. Thanks!

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