Your Feedback is very much important. check my design closely and send me some feedback

Dear Project Owner,

I have submitted my designs.
I know you are busy but, would you mind to give me your feedback?
Please tell me if I am on the right track.

Thank you!

Best regards,
Coco

Hi, I have submitted two logos, can you please check and please provide me your feedback. Design #15148303 and #15148291.

Thank you.