I saw your revision and the loop didnt swoop naturally if that makes sens. Wondering if there is a clever way to make the e look as thin and loopy as a thread so that it hooks and loops properly. I uploaded a few images of a loop effect that I am going for and even some curvy fonts.

Also, please change the slogan to a shade of the purple. The yellow is making it hard to read. (keep in mind I am getting this feedback from friends and family) I agree with the blend of purple and orange. I will comment on the image so you know exactly which blend I am going with.

Hi . Kindly review my revision which is design #13066796 and comment privately .
Thank you .