It's a good improvement but still missing something I can't put a finger on it

La City

Hi.
Thanks for your ratings. I have submitted a few revisions. If possible, can you tell me where my designs are lacking so that I can improvise my designs.
Thanks again.

Hi
Hope you are doing well. Worked on a concept and submitted.
Awaiting for your valuable feedback.

Thank you. Have nice day!

Dmad

HI, I have made some new revisions. Any feedback or comment on the Designs? Thank you very much
-FastLogoMaker

Hi There,

I have submitted you a couple of revised designs #10257274 and #10257275. Please have a look and let me know your feedback.

Thanks.