Kindly review my entry and give me feedback. Thanks

Hi,

Please provide feedback and rating on my submissions

Thanks

Hi,

Thanks for the submissions.
In my brief I was wanting a Logo to go with the words.
I attached a picture in the brief of an elegant L with the "Light Me UP brand underneath this. This was more what I am looking for. Do you think your designs could represent something more closely to this?

kindly check revised designs and let me know if you want more changes or anything else.

feedback pleas

feedback would be appreciated,
thanks

feedback please. thanks