Should the suggested punch line also included in the logo? Or just add as a tag lines?

Just add as a tag line

Feedback please

Hello there my dear client :) Well I'm here because I want to have an update in your contest, Please let me know if you have some concerns for it and send me some feedback so that we can talk about it. Looking forward to hear you soon :) Thanks!

All the best,

- Maine Mendoza

Hello there my dear client :) Well I'm here because I want to have an update in your contest, Please let me know if you have some concerns for it and send me some feedback so that we can talk about it. Looking forward to hear you soon :) Thanks!

All the best,

- Maine Mendoza

Hi There,

As still I'm working on your project and want to give you best of best design, which fulfill your all requirements on top notch level. Please give your valuable feedback / suggestion to give you the best result.

Thanks and awaiting for your valuable reply

can I have feedback on my design please?
Thank you. :)

Hello there my dear client :) I have already submitted my entry and followed carefully the informations posted in the brief. Please let me know if you still needs some changes/revisions. Looking forward to hear you soon. Thanks!

All the best,

- Maine Mendoza

Hello there my dear client :) I just want to have an update in your project, Please send me some reply. Thanks!

All the best,

- Maine Mendoza